Tharlam Gyatso

The Shriners with their tiny bikes Are children with their candy stripes Catching The sun light leapt from to and fro. Who exactly are the Shriners? Do you mean Shiners? ...

From the depression of skulls. That people shall be free. ...it's rather too simple. ...never forget to always be poetic . Too simple? Nothing is too simple, my friend. Why ...

THANK YOU for your suggestions folks. They have been taken on board. :)

William Carlos Williams, eh? :D Thanks for the comments, folks. I appreciate your taking the time.

Okay, cool. I like the adjustments you have made on this one. I thank you. Punctuation is not my best friend you see... :D

Okay, I see where you are coming from with the punctuation. We have to go back to the question of what the poem is about, however. I work in abstract ...